I’m Not really facing any problems with any of my comp but I’m very happy with the way that they are turning out and can’t wait to see how the final product turns out when I submit it again for a grade. I plan on taking my time with these two comp because I already know what I have to fix and the things that I have to change.
P.S It’s the same thing as Blog 16
I’m not really facing any trouble with what I want to submit for my final portfolio. The compositions that I want to revise only have small mistakes that I have to fix. The comments that I received is what I am fixing to make it better than it was originally. I plan on making comp 2 or colorful with lots of pictures of what I’m trying to portray and for comp 1 I’m going to be adding a lot more examples
Well I already started revising composition 2 because their wasn’t that much revising to do with that but to add and explain but with composition 1 theirs a lot of work that has to be done but I know if I I’m able to start at a stable paste than I would be good with it. I plan on fixing something everyday if I can until I know that I’m in the clear of submitting it for my final grade. So I’m excited to see the paste that I am going and I’m not rushing it either
The two compositions that I plan to revise for my final portfolio is probably composition 1 and 2. I don’t really have a reason on why I want to revise them but I loved doing both of them I especially had fun when I was doing composition 2 because all the quotes and songs that I put were very touching to me in my heart and for composition 1 it was a let go of all the negative things that most people thought of me so it’s like a haha in their faces.
For composition 4 I had to scrap my whole original idea to a whole new one which I like very much because I think its very true of how social media as an affect on teens today and how we are pressured into doing something that we might or might not do. I’m finding a lot of new research on why social media is influencing young ages and I’m finding a lot of interesting research on it which is really surprising. The old research wasn’t quiet working out like I wanted. The reason it changed is because the one I’m writing down sounds more interesting than me talking about the negative side of teen pregnancies but by me talking about ways on why we feel pressured by the media sex is much more interesting because their are a lot of ways that I could go about it than what I wanted to do originally with my paper. I’m loving the way its going right now because I believe that everyone should read or know how media influences and the way many young ages think when they see things like this and how they react.
In blog 11 I said that I have my claim and what I would like to say in my composition 4. One thing that I’m having trouble with is my body paragraphs. I don’t know what my body paragraphs and what I should talk about I know that I obviously should talk about the negatives about being pregnant when your a teenager and the many repercussions of it by examples that I might use. My topic is pretty easy because I can easily find it on the internet and argue why it is bad etc. Hopefully I will workshop tomorrow and I’ll know how I’m going to go about it than I’ll go from there with comp 4
My argument in Composition 4 is that teens should not get pregnant because there ruining their whole life by having a baby. My audience would probably be high school because its most common and they seem to be the one who experiences it more. The difference between Composition 3 is that it was a blog where I would be telling you my daily life the struggles that I might face being pregnant as for composition 4 I would have more details of what its like to be a teenager and pregnant with facts and statistics of girls that can’t even finish school just because they have to take care of the baby or how most of the baby daddies are absent in most of their lives. Its definitely going to be different because its a baby so it would come together very well and what I actually want to speak on.
The thing that I am revising with my composition is me trying to make it real as possible and to make people actually believe that I was pregnant. The game plan that I have is to take each one and make it seem real and kind of raw so you actually think I went through all these things which I did not. Well I don’t have one just to make it fun and realistic as it can be. I just want to make sure that people learn from this and not be a teen parent
My Biggest issue with my composition is that I want people to actually believe what I am trying to portray as a sixteen year old girl who is pregnant. I am actually really excited about what I’m doing for composition 3 because now maybe kids would think twice before getting pregnant. Well I know how I want to start it off but don’t know if it is the right direction that I should be going. I’m not feeling any type of way but I very happy with what I’m trying to convey and hope that its believable when its finished
For Composition 3, I’m really not sure because my topic that I have decided to do has already been used many times before on so many occasions. I would do a blog of girls who have been pregnant and can’t really do anything about it like go to school etc, maybe if teen girls hear this they will think twice before getting pregnant. I believe that people need to take this serious because I think girls think its fun and don’t know that its another life that’s growing inside of them that they will be taking care of. Maybe more girls will think twice before sleeping with anybody else. The limitations on what I want to write is that its already known to the world and there are shows about girls getting pregnant at a young age. I hope as I right this it portrays something that should not be taking likely with parents or girls.
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